2011年10月19日 星期三

The Feasibility of the Establishment of Red-light Districts(revised annotation 1)

This is my revision of annotation 1.
In this revision, I take the people's saying in the video I find for example, and show my oponions about their saying. And I also compare Taiwan's situation with Holland's to find the feasibility of the establishment of red-light districts.



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   Instead of talking about the decriminalizing of prostitution, perhaps I should focus on the policy of the establishment of red-light districts first. In fact, Prostitution had been decriminalized by the government this year. And the establishment of red-light districts becomes a controversy issue. At April in this year, the Premier Den Yih- Wu (2011, the news from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dR7J4XxSN6A)said that every city could establish red-light districts in the specific areas. In these areas, sex workers could have sexual transaction without punishment. But it still has some restrictions. For example, the red-light districts could not be established near the schools, churches, temples, hospitals and the places related to education or religion. What’s more, the sex workers have to apply for licenses and register their names to ensure that they have the legality to engage in sexual transition.  They also have to receive regular health examination to avoid the infection of sexual diseases. And they cannot solicit actively. However, if they have sexual transaction out of the areas, they will be punished.  

  In the video(2011, published by Zhong Tian News from the website http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dR7J4XxSN6A) I found which is related to the policy, there are a few of lawmakers raise the following doubts to this issue. And I would like to aim at these following doubts to talk about the feasibility of this issue. A lawmaker says that it might lead to the ruin of morality. To this point, I want talk about the experience of Holland first. "Holland is the first country to establish red-light districts. And sex working has been legal since 2000. The sex workers in Holland have to pay tax to the government. It results in the increase of the tax revenue. And lots of tourists come to here to see the true colours of Holland’s special sexual industry. So it also stimulates the development of local sightseeing."(2009, The Liberty Times' digital news, Holland's red-light distrcict, http://www.libertytimes.com.tw/2009/new/jun/12/today-so1-3.htm)Therefore, the establishment of red-light districts brings some positive benefits to the country. Most importantly, people in Holland have an open-minded attitude to the establishment of red-light districts.  They regard it as a legitimate industry. And the sex workers gather in this area do reach the goal of the management  of dispersed sex workers successfully. I can’t see the serious ruin of morality occurs in Holland. So perhaps the problem is that Taiwan and Holland are from different culture backgrounds, their acceptability of red-light districts quit different spontaneously. But if we never carry out this policy, we could not judge the degree of negative or positive influence it brings to society. And the concept that it will break the morality in society can be changed as well. All the concepts are variable but not fixed.
  And some people question that how to establish red-light districts? Are there any available spaces to establish red-light districts? To begin with, the choice of the areas to establish red-light districts is important. If the government would like to establish in communities or near the communities, it is necessary to gain the residents’ agreement.  But people in Taiwan tend to disagree with the establishment of red-light districts when it comes to establishing near their community. And under the restriction that the red-light districts could not be established near the schools, churches, temples, hospitals and the places related to education or religion, perhaps there are only mountains or fields could establish red-light districts. What’s more, Taiwan is such a narrow island that burdens the population of high density. Most of the spaces are used to establish buildings, houses, and so on. After all, commercial development is one of the main industry which Taiwan focus on. It’s hard for Taiwan to establish red-light districts in the areas of commercial development. So, no matter the attitude to sexual industry or the conditions to establish red-light districts, Taiwan’s environment could not offer those sex workers a specific space likes Holland to establish red-light districts. And as the modern society develops rapidly, it is getting harder and harder to carry out this policy even though more and more people can receive the establishment of red-light districts. Because the future problem will be that there are not any available and suitable spaces to establish it.    
    

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  2. 1. I only see one doubt. List the others or delete “the following” and add “for example” before “a lawmaker”.
    2. What is “it”?
    3. The quote is about the economic benefits, not morality. I suggest that you focus on morality here. You can discuss the benefits in a new paragraph.
    4. Put the full citation as a reference. You can cite the source as (The liberty Times, 2009) in the text.
    5. If a claim is not supported by the results of a survey, you need to use “seem to”or "may" to show your speculation.
    6.“You” do not live in Holland. How do you ”see” if there is “the serious ruin of morality”?

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